Hooray!! you got it to work. Now, it just seems that it is set to private. You can change this by clicking on "Publication Options" on the bottom of the screen when in the edit screen.
What a fabulous example! This is what digital storytelling is all about: your words alone couldn't tell the story as well and the pictures alone couldn't do the story justice either. They both needed each other and you made it work: it's wonderful! In my mind, a soft and peaceful piano music was playing as I was reading the text... I wish I could hear the commissioned piece with your Voicethread. What is it like?